4th ESO students have written five short stories on the topic "Our World's Refugess". We are going to select one of these stories to present to a national contest. Read the stories.
I THINK THE BEST STORY IS 'MY TURNIG POINT' BECAUSE IT'S A STORY THAT HAVE IT ALL, AND IT'S VERY ORGANIZED AND ESTRUCTURE IS GOOD AND THAT IS WHY I CHOOSE THIS STORY. :) ALISAN
Hello my name is Fernando Mendoza and I’m in 4th of ESO. In my opinion the best story it´s “My turning point” because that story is quite well structured and organised. The story was also well-written because it explains everything you need to know to understand the whole story, and the story-line it´s well-developed.
Hello! I´m Sheila from 4ºESO. I think that the best story is "MY TURNING POINT",because is very interesting and it´s structure is organized. Is a good job!
Hello!! I'm Alejandra from 4º ESO. In my opinion the best story is "My turning point" because the structure is organized and good, the vocabulary is good too. finally this story is interesting and explain all the things.
Hi I'm Alba Ortega from 4° Eso and i think that the best story is "MY TURNING POINT" because it talk about all the important themes un the life of a refugee and not because is my job.
Hello!! I´m Paola from 4º ESO. In my opinión the best story is "My turning point" because is very incredible story, the structure of store is good and the vocabulary too. Good job!!
Hello and I think the bests is Yasmine life
ReplyDeleteI THINK THE BEST STORY IS 'MY TURNIG POINT' BECAUSE IT'S A STORY THAT HAVE IT ALL, AND IT'S VERY ORGANIZED AND ESTRUCTURE IS GOOD AND THAT IS WHY I CHOOSE THIS STORY.
ReplyDelete:) ALISAN
Hello I read all the stories and I think the best one is my turning point
ReplyDeleteHi I´m Rebeca from 4 ESO
ReplyDeleteI like the storie of "The Journey", I think that is so interesting, creative and original.
Good job!!
Hello I am Iván from 4º ESO and the best story for me is ``My turning point´´, because I like the content of the story.
ReplyDeleteI´m Julian Martinez from 4ESO
ReplyDeleteThe one I like the most is Yasmine because it's a story that touched my heart
I am Alvaro and I like my turning point becouse is very good and
ReplyDeletethis points are very well explained
1-for the first story
ReplyDelete2- Amish
3-The journey
4- The comic
5- my turning point
Hello my name is Fernando Mendoza and I’m in 4th of ESO.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion the best story it´s “My turning point” because that story is quite well structured and organised. The story was also well-written because it explains everything you need to know to understand the whole story, and the story-line it´s well-developed.
Hello! I´m Sheila from 4ºESO.
ReplyDeleteI think that the best story is "MY TURNING POINT",because is very interesting and it´s structure is organized.
Is a good job!
Hello!! I'm Alejandra from 4º ESO.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion the best story is "My turning point" because the structure is organized and good, the vocabulary is good too. finally this story is interesting and explain all the things.
Hi I'm Alba Ortega from 4° Eso and i think that the best story is "MY TURNING POINT" because it talk about all the important themes un the life of a refugee and not because is my job.
ReplyDeleteHello!! I´m Paola from 4º ESO.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinión the best story is "My turning point" because is very incredible story, the structure of store is good and the vocabulary too.
Good job!!